Post by MST3Kutie on Jun 28, 2008 0:02:01 GMT -5
Hey guys, I made a remake of an older MST fic I did. It was called Mstie Mayhem and can be found at my site here: www.freewebs.com/callingallmsties/fanfics.htm
Please read it and critique. ;D
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The New Girl
A Mystery Science Theater 3000 Fanfiction
By MST3Kutie/Kataangrl/TwistaCrow
Chapter One
Two robots were stuck to a large counter by four shiny metal hooks. One of the robots looked like a bright, cherry red gum-ball machine. He had a black and white hover skirt that allowed him to move around. Attached to his torso were two springs. Both of which had silvery white doll hands at the end. He had a creamy white beak that allowed him to speak-and sing-. His name was Tom Servo.
The other robot's name was Crow. He was a gleaming gold color. He -unlike Tom Servo- had two thin legs and feet that allowed him to walk. Crow's torso looked like two gold plates brought together by a black tube. His narrow metal arms were connected to the first metal plate by a small black square. And his hands looked more like metal claws -although they weren't sharp-. He had two sunlight yellow eyes with black diamonds painted on them. Crow, like Tom, had a long beak that matched the rest of his body. And he had a net secured on his head.
A man with blond hair walked into the room. He was wearing a dark blue jumpsuit. His name was Mike Nelson. "Hey guys, what are you doing?" Mike asked, apparently confused.
"We fastened ourselves to the counter," Crow replied casually. Mike still had a baffled expression on his face.
"Yeah, um, we want to see who can stay on longer," Tom replied nervously. Mike's befuddled expression faded into a more casual one. On top of the counter were three buttons. One was a golden yellow. The second was a grass green. And the third was a crimson red. All of a sudden, the red one glowed.
"Oh, Pearl's calling," Mike noticed. But instead of pressing the red one -which he was supposed to-, he slapped the green one. Not many people know this, but the green button is for emergencies only. When activated, the floor disappears and anything standing on it falls into deep space. Fortunately, the counter was clipped to the wall with a sturdy piece of metal. So the bots were safe. But Mike wasn't as lucky.
"Emergency button activated," Magic Voice announced. The last the 'bots heard from their human friend was a loud yell. But soon after, he was blanketed by the darkness. "Emergency button deactivated," Magic Voice declared. The floor then reappeared and closed.
Tom leaned over to peck the red button with his beak. He did, but fell over in the process. Luckily, there was a floor this time.
The screen it front of them flickered, and the image of a woman materialized. She had curly blond hair in a bun and donned a dark green lab coat. "Hey, just checking in-Where the heck is Mike?" the woman asked.
"He escaped," Crow stated without hesitation.
"What?" she yelled at the gold robot.
"Yeah Pearl, he pressed the wrong button. The green one to be exact," Tom explained uneasily. Pearl gave Tom and Crow a blank frown. But then a huge grin was plastered on her face.
"I got it!" She shouted excitedly. You could almost see a lightbulb above her head. "I'll get Brain Guy to use that new Dell laptop I just bought to make a contest. It's brilliant!"
"Pearl, who would fall for that?" Tom Servo doubted.
"I can just see it now, 'Sign up now, and you might win the chance to watch really bad movies like Manos: The Hands of Fate with two annoying robot companions'" Crow added sarcasticly.
Pearl then explained,"Well, I'll lie and say they'll win a 6 day trip to the Caribbean."
Crow and Tom nodded as the image of Pearl faded out of sight. Crow then detached himself from the counter and walked away to the right. While Tom strolled to the left.
As Crow was walking through the hallway, he thought to himself, "Could it be, her?"
Please read it and critique. ;D
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The New Girl
A Mystery Science Theater 3000 Fanfiction
By MST3Kutie/Kataangrl/TwistaCrow
Chapter One
Two robots were stuck to a large counter by four shiny metal hooks. One of the robots looked like a bright, cherry red gum-ball machine. He had a black and white hover skirt that allowed him to move around. Attached to his torso were two springs. Both of which had silvery white doll hands at the end. He had a creamy white beak that allowed him to speak-and sing-. His name was Tom Servo.
The other robot's name was Crow. He was a gleaming gold color. He -unlike Tom Servo- had two thin legs and feet that allowed him to walk. Crow's torso looked like two gold plates brought together by a black tube. His narrow metal arms were connected to the first metal plate by a small black square. And his hands looked more like metal claws -although they weren't sharp-. He had two sunlight yellow eyes with black diamonds painted on them. Crow, like Tom, had a long beak that matched the rest of his body. And he had a net secured on his head.
A man with blond hair walked into the room. He was wearing a dark blue jumpsuit. His name was Mike Nelson. "Hey guys, what are you doing?" Mike asked, apparently confused.
"We fastened ourselves to the counter," Crow replied casually. Mike still had a baffled expression on his face.
"Yeah, um, we want to see who can stay on longer," Tom replied nervously. Mike's befuddled expression faded into a more casual one. On top of the counter were three buttons. One was a golden yellow. The second was a grass green. And the third was a crimson red. All of a sudden, the red one glowed.
"Oh, Pearl's calling," Mike noticed. But instead of pressing the red one -which he was supposed to-, he slapped the green one. Not many people know this, but the green button is for emergencies only. When activated, the floor disappears and anything standing on it falls into deep space. Fortunately, the counter was clipped to the wall with a sturdy piece of metal. So the bots were safe. But Mike wasn't as lucky.
"Emergency button activated," Magic Voice announced. The last the 'bots heard from their human friend was a loud yell. But soon after, he was blanketed by the darkness. "Emergency button deactivated," Magic Voice declared. The floor then reappeared and closed.
Tom leaned over to peck the red button with his beak. He did, but fell over in the process. Luckily, there was a floor this time.
The screen it front of them flickered, and the image of a woman materialized. She had curly blond hair in a bun and donned a dark green lab coat. "Hey, just checking in-Where the heck is Mike?" the woman asked.
"He escaped," Crow stated without hesitation.
"What?" she yelled at the gold robot.
"Yeah Pearl, he pressed the wrong button. The green one to be exact," Tom explained uneasily. Pearl gave Tom and Crow a blank frown. But then a huge grin was plastered on her face.
"I got it!" She shouted excitedly. You could almost see a lightbulb above her head. "I'll get Brain Guy to use that new Dell laptop I just bought to make a contest. It's brilliant!"
"Pearl, who would fall for that?" Tom Servo doubted.
"I can just see it now, 'Sign up now, and you might win the chance to watch really bad movies like Manos: The Hands of Fate with two annoying robot companions'" Crow added sarcasticly.
Pearl then explained,"Well, I'll lie and say they'll win a 6 day trip to the Caribbean."
Crow and Tom nodded as the image of Pearl faded out of sight. Crow then detached himself from the counter and walked away to the right. While Tom strolled to the left.
As Crow was walking through the hallway, he thought to himself, "Could it be, her?"
