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Post by GizmonicInstitute on Nov 16, 2008 1:13:21 GMT -5
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Post by Pete on Nov 16, 2008 17:06:10 GMT -5
There's definitely some funny stuff here, but tighter editing and a quicker pace would improve it dramatically, I believe. It's probably twice as long as it really needs to be. Of course, I'm nobody, but I do know that timing is the key to comedy. Good luck with future films, I subscribed to your channel. ;D
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Spoonchan
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Post by Spoonchan on May 12, 2009 18:02:53 GMT -5
lol this is hilarious!!! VERY funny!!! ...... ...... AND you are VERY cute  |
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